more whining from WLB

maury_cohen: i write about marcus to figure out things about myself
maury_cohen: one goal of this last story, which failed, imho
maury_cohen: was to have 2 characters instead of 1 character and a bunch of 1-dimensional line-speakers
maury_cohen: some day i'll be able to write people other than me
maury_cohen: and probably around that time, i'll be able to make some sense of people other than me